Post by redstars on Aug 26, 2013 19:10:03 GMT -5
Name: Jaypaw
Age (in moons): Ten moons
Gender: Male
Allegiance: Grassclan
Appearance: Jaypaw is slightly bigger than the average apprentice, the opposite of his sister who is smaller than average. Jaypaw is grey-brown in appearance and has white chest, muzzle and toes. Very faint tabby markings of a shade darker than his fur mainly around his neck and tail.
Personality: He’s really protective, especially of his sister, Fallowpaw. He’s more serious now than when he was a kit; slightly wary another clan may attack the clan again. He hopes to become a good warrior so he can protect his sister and his clan.
History:
When Jaypaw was just about six moons old he and his sister were playing hide and seek around that time, Jaykit had squished into the thorn bush his sister was in and hid there with her. Fallowkit started to wail and ask what was happening, hearing his sister so distressed was awful, he didn’t know how to respond his own heart about to beat right out of his chest. Right then a terrifying screech was heard. Another clan was invading. They were soon ushered into the nursery, Jaykit’s heart was pounding enough to make him sick, around then a huge paw swooped down trying to claw at him and his sister. Turning to face his sister curling up around his conscious sister fur ruffled at the intruder. Luckily the cat had been stopped and soon enough jaykit hopped it’d be over.
Jaypaw enjoys working with his mentor and learning about how to be a warrior. He’s not to fond of basic cleaning tasks but he does them without complaining. He enjoys hunting more than fighting practice, but he’s not all that good at it.
Winter has made Jaypaw skinny and weak and tired from hunger, but he’s ever determined to push through with his sister through thick and thin.
(I'm sorry for not posting this......hope this is okay, please tell me if you need his history written a little differently or longer personality.)[/b]
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Age (in moons): Ten moons
Gender: Male
Allegiance: Grassclan
Appearance: Jaypaw is slightly bigger than the average apprentice, the opposite of his sister who is smaller than average. Jaypaw is grey-brown in appearance and has white chest, muzzle and toes. Very faint tabby markings of a shade darker than his fur mainly around his neck and tail.
Personality: He’s really protective, especially of his sister, Fallowpaw. He’s more serious now than when he was a kit; slightly wary another clan may attack the clan again. He hopes to become a good warrior so he can protect his sister and his clan.
History:
When Jaypaw was just about six moons old he and his sister were playing hide and seek around that time, Jaykit had squished into the thorn bush his sister was in and hid there with her. Fallowkit started to wail and ask what was happening, hearing his sister so distressed was awful, he didn’t know how to respond his own heart about to beat right out of his chest. Right then a terrifying screech was heard. Another clan was invading. They were soon ushered into the nursery, Jaykit’s heart was pounding enough to make him sick, around then a huge paw swooped down trying to claw at him and his sister. Turning to face his sister curling up around his conscious sister fur ruffled at the intruder. Luckily the cat had been stopped and soon enough jaykit hopped it’d be over.
Jaypaw enjoys working with his mentor and learning about how to be a warrior. He’s not to fond of basic cleaning tasks but he does them without complaining. He enjoys hunting more than fighting practice, but he’s not all that good at it.
Winter has made Jaypaw skinny and weak and tired from hunger, but he’s ever determined to push through with his sister through thick and thin.
(I'm sorry for not posting this......hope this is okay, please tell me if you need his history written a little differently or longer personality.)[/b]
Check 1: [x] Sprucetail
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just fix the Fallowpaw thing (if it needs fixing) and you're all set!
