Foxcloud

[graystripe]

Name: Foxcloud
Age (in moons): 21 moons
Gender: Female
Allegiance: PineClan
Appearance: Foxcloud is a warm ginger she-cat with hollow, emerald eyes. Her chest is white and covers up to her lower jaw and down through her stomach. She has two nicks on her right ear from a past scuffle while on a border patrol, but admires it as a trophy of her victory that cold evening. [ bit.ly/Y41hra ]
Personality: Foxcloud doesn't take lightly to any risky foolishness. If you're on a hunting patrol, no, she does not want to see how many acorns you can stuff in your mouth. Though, back at camp, she couldn't care otherwise. For such a serious and determined warrior, it's not like she has never done anything silly before. In fact she considers herself one of the funniest warriors in all of PineClan. To her claims, they just simply "come to her." She's overall a giddy little she-cat. It doesn't take a StarClan cat to find that out!
History: Foxcloud was born into a single litter of one. Though many queens would be appalled at such misfortune, her mother was relieved. Not wanting a large litter from the start, Foxcloud knew her mother was one of the top hunters of PineClan. Oh, the prey she'd caught for her only kit. At one point, one could almost mistake young Foxcloud for a kittypet.

When apprenticed, she'd been the heaviest she-cat of the bunch. It's safe to say it didn't take her mentor long to lure her out of her well-fed trance. Seemingly in less than a moon was she back to the normal weight for an apprentice. She aspired to be an intelligent hunter as her mother was. With that came her strict patrol spirit.

Cats who hadn't interacted much with Foxcloud outside of patrolling would easily assume she was just some uptight hormonal she-cat all about perfection. Any cat who actually knew her could easily laugh in their face. As a warrior, she earned the title as a notably good hunter. Aside from the occasional patrol scuffle, Foxcloud isn't much of an arguable cat and is reasonable.



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RPer information
Name: graystripe
First language: english
Literacy level: semi-lit to lit

[Sprucetail]

I really like her! One thing though, she almost seems more deserving of a -whisker suffix. Maybe just check up on that. Otherwise, I like it!

[Leah]

I agree with Sprucetail that this cat is not a -cloud. That's for a calm cat, your cat doesn't sound calm (hehe!) and I think -whisker would be the perfect suffix. Foxwhisker - adorable name, absolute win! Don't worry, your cat sounds absolutely excellent otherwise.